小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com专项技能保分练(二十四)短文改错Test1[2019·山东省、湖北省联考]Severaldaysbefore,weheldanactivityintheschoolyardtolearnandappreciatewhatthehistoryandartofPekingOperafacialmasks.Facialmasksdatedbacktoover1,000years.Differentcolorsofmasks,aswellthevariousfacialexpressions,representdifferentcharactersandpersonalitiesoftheroles.PreparedPekingOperathemedthings,weletPekingOperafanstrythem.Ittookmenearlyoneandahalfhourtofinishonepieceoffacepainting.SomefansevenputonfacialmakeupunderthehelpofMissMei,aprofessionalteacher,andtheycertainlookedimpressive.Wealladmiredthembecauseoftheperfectmakeuptechnique.Whatanmeaningfuldaywehad!答案与解析：Severaldaysbefore,weheldanactivityintheschoolyardtolearnandappreciatethehistoryandartofPekingOperafacialmasks.Facialmasksdatedbacktoover1,000years.Differentcolorsofmasks,aswell∧thevariousfacialexpressions,representdifferentcharactersandpersonalitiesoftheroles.PreparedPekingOperathemedthings,weletPekingOperafanstrythem.Ittookmenearlyoneandahalfhourtofinishonepieceoffacepainting.SomefansevenputonfacialmakeupunderthehelpofMissMei,aprofessionalteacher,andtheycertainlookedimpressive.Wealladmiredthembecauseoftheperfectmakeuptechnique.Whatanmeaningfuldaywehad!①before改为ago副词错误。ago表示“从事情发生到现在时间过去了多久”，需和过去时连用。before指“从事情发生到过去某个时间是多久”，常和完成时连用。由下文对活动的介绍可知，活动是几天前举办的，故此处用ago。②删除appreciate后的what引导词多用。what可引导宾语从句，但此处宾语是名词短语，故what多余。③dated改为date动词时态错误。此处dateback应用一般现在时表示一种客观情况，且前面主语为复数形式，故用date。④aswell后加as固定搭配错误。aswellas意为“也，除……之外，以及某事物/某人”。⑤Prepared改为Preparing非谓语动词错误。此处作状语，且prepare与主语we是逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词形式。⑥hour改为hours名词单复数错误。oneandahalf后跟名词复数。⑦under改为with介词错误。withthehelpof...“在……的帮助下”。⑧certain改为certainly词性错误。修饰动词looked应用副词。⑨them改为her代词错误。我们都很钦佩她娴熟的化妆技巧。此处指上文中的MissMei，故用her。小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com⑩an改为a冠词错误。meaningful读音以辅音音素开头，故应用不定冠词a。Test2[2019·江西八所重点中学高三联考]Itwasraininghardlyoutside,whichmadeitdifficultformetogohomeforlunch.JustasIwaswonderingwhatIshouldeatatnoon,Isawafamiliarfigurepassedbyourclassroom.Irushedoutandfounditwasmymother,alreadyinfifties,whichbroughtmelunchinspiteoftheheavyrain.InChina,manyparentsmakegreatsacrificesforourchildren.Butwhathadthechildrendoneinreturn?Alltoooften,mostchildrenjusttakeitforgrantedthattheirparentshouldserveforthemunconditionally.Mydearmumordad,thankyouverymuchforbringingmeup.HowshallIdoforyou?答案与解析：Itwasraininghardlyoutside,whichmadeitdifficultformetogohomeforlunch.JustasIwaswonderingwhatIshouldeatatnoon,Isawafamiliarfigurepassedbyourclassroom.Irushedoutandfounditwasmymother,alreadyin∧fifties,whichbroughtmelunchinspiteoftheheavyrain.InChina,manyparentsmakegreatsacrificesforourchildren.Butwhathadthechildrendoneinreturn?Alltoooften,mostchildrenjusttakeitforgrantedthattheirparentshouldservethemunconditionally.Mydearmumordad,thankyouverymuchforbringingmeup.HowshallIdoforyou?①har...