小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好。Jennywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn’thelpweepingsorrowfullywhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhoursshefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat,butitwasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnothingwithher.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthemiddle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shesighedandhadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles?”“Oh,yes...butIdon’thavemoneyonme…”shereplied.“That’snothing.I’lltreatyoutoday,”saidtheman.“Comein.”Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,whosesmellwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit?”askedthemankindly.“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”saidJennyasshewipedhertears.“Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomercilesscomparedtoastranger!!”Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,“Girl,doyoureallythinkso?Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.Canyounumberthetimesshecookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourgratitudetoher?”Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;sherememberedmother’sfamiliarfaceandweatheredhands.“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelindebted,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”Onthewayhome,Jennymadeuphermindtomakeanapologytohermotherforherrudenessassoonasshearrivedhome.Paragraph1:Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.,小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com【文章概要】本文中心思想是:詹妮是家里的独子,与妈妈争吵后离家出走,在街上闲逛后,她饿了想吃东西,但是没有钱,店主给了她一碗面,她非常感激,店主说她更应该感谢她的妈妈,最终詹妮回家向妈妈表示了歉意。【参考范文】Paragraph1:Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Whensheknockedatthedoor,shefoundthedoorwaslockedandhermotherwasnotin.Tiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse."Wherecouldmymotherbe?"shewondered,"wasshestillangrywithme?"Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother.Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther,shefeltratherashamed,andtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.Paragraph2:Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Sheraisedherheadandsawthefamiliarfaceofhermother."Hereyoucome!I'vebeenlookingforyou,"shesaid,tiredandrelieved.Jennycouldn'thelpthrowingherselfintohermother'sarms."Mum,I'msosorryandthankyouforallyouhavedoneforme."Sheexpressedhersincereapologyandgreatgratitude.Hearingthis,hermothersmiledpattingherbackgently.【详解】续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:詹妮回家之后发现母亲不在家,自己内心开始反思自己的行为,感到后悔(因为第二段才有敲门—一段不能之间见到母亲)第二段开头是:母亲回来敲门,詹妮向母亲表达自己的歉意以及母亲对詹妮同样有所反思的回答从句使用Tiredandsad,shesatdowninfrontofthehouse.形容词做伴随状语Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther...
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