小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com读后续写作基本技法(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意:续写词数应为150个左右。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step1:厘清主题把握走向小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com要素描述主题whenMother’sDay本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己动手做起早餐来,但不幸的是,他们接连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下获得成功,他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲,母亲非常感动的故事。whereAthomewhoThetwins—JeffandJennawhatThepairpreparedbreakfastfortheirmother.whyTheywantedtogivetheirmotherasurprise.Step2:寻找主线深挖要点文段线索文脉线索前文情感线excited→disappointed故事线First,theyboiledtheporridge.→Next,theymadetheFrenchtoast.→Asliceofbreadturnedblack.→Thentheyfoundtheporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.→Theotherpieceofbreadturnedblack,too.续写要点1.Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.2.TheirmotherwassurprisedtofindthebreakfastcookedbyJeffandJenna.Step3:精研首句起承转合根据所给续文段落首句产生问题链接,形成续写思路,采用G-N(Given-New)和Q-A(Question-Answer)策略,做好起承转合,创造新的情节。Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Q1:WhatwasFather’sfirstinstinctwhenfacedwiththemess?Q2:Howdidthetwinsexplaintheirplantotheirfather?Q3:WhatdidFatherdotohelpthetwinstomakedeliciousFrenchtoastandchickenporridge?Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Q1:WhatwasMother’sfirstinstinctwhenthetwinswokeherup?Q2:WouldthetwinsgiveMotherabigsurprise?HowdidtheyexpresstheirbestwishestoMother?Q3:HowdidMotherfeel?Howcanyoudesigntheendingmoreappealingandmeaningful?续写第一段梗概Th...