小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com精炼语言确保首尾照应【真题再现】(2023·浙江1月高考)Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意:续写词数应为150个左右。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain._________________________________________________________________________________________________小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com____________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题策略】第一步根据续写第一段第一句推出首段续写“三要点”首句Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.梗概MythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbird.Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowshewasgettingonnow.第二句AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromspider-webs.尾句Hadshemanagedtofindherwayhome,orwasshestillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?第二步根据续写第二段第一句推出第二段续写“两要点”首句Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.梗概Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.尾句...IwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.第三步根据“情感线”和“情节线”列出写作关键句情感线Iwasingreatcomfort→Ifeltasurgeofreliefandawe情节线Iwenttothefarmagain→mythoughtsdriftedbacktothepastmoment→Irushedtothedesertedhouse→itwasagreatcomfort→Iwonderedhowshewasgettingon;Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared→itseemedthatshewaswaitingforme→Iclimbedintomycaranddroveaway第四步谋篇成文,文字流畅考场高分作文续写高分亮点秀Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromspider-webs.Irushedbacktothe①desertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound....