小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com专题12读后续写十句五定法写大纲+四步设计补全情节一、两段十句五定法的思路Para1.Para2.定句1:衔接提示句--心理/动作链定句6:衔接提示句--心理/动作链句2:句7:句3:句8:句4:定句9:紧贴原文,交代结局定句5:过渡到P2首句定句10:点睛其中第一段中的句1与句5,第二段中的句1,句4和句5共五句话基本是固定的,其他的句子安排根据具体情况可作轻微调整。【2023年新高考全国Ⅰ&II卷】WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.comWhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章主要讲述一个学生参加了一个写作比赛并获奖的故事。两句提示分别如下:Para.1Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Para.2Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.根据这两句话可以基本定位,第一段讲自己听到比赛获胜消息后的场景,第二段写将这个好消息与老师分享。因此大致思路会如下列出:Para.1句1:衔接-令我意外的是,我在这个写作比赛中荣获了第一名。句2:主角动作+心理:我欣喜不已。句3:配角动作+心理:我的老师为我感到骄傲句4:主角动作+心理:感谢老师。句5:衔接Para.2:参加颁奖典礼。Para.2句1:衔接:老师在等我。句2:主角动作+心理:再次感谢老师句3:配角动作+心理:老师恭喜并激励我句4:交代结局:我爱上了写作。小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com句5:点睛:老师的信任与激励成就了我的今天。这两...
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