小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com专题14读后续写八步成文法【三大步】三步核心：审题构思润色审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。最后，务必整洁地写在答题卡上。【八小步】1.情绪：消极情绪2.细节：进一步解释描写3.转折：个人的努力或借助外界4.转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰5.失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题6.新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）7.结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折8.总结：点题，呼应前文读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict，solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：第1步:消极情绪1.awaveof...=afeeling/senseof+情绪名词floodedover阵...的情绪涌上心头。sb=sweptoversb小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com情绪名词fear,terror,fright,panic害怕happiness,joy,delight开心gratitude,appreciation感激sadness,sorrow悲伤anger,rage,fury愤怒anxiety,stress,nervousness紧张,不安surprise,amazement,shock震惊guilt,regret后悔,内疚Sbfeltsbwasfloatinginanoceanof+情绪名词某人感到自己漂浮在...的海洋中.第2步：细节(动作刻画)：进一步解释描写描写与head有关动作noddedone'shead点头shookone'shead摇头描写“看”这一动作词:saw看见spotted发现recognized认出observedsbdoing/dosth注意到某人正在做/做过短语:staredat盯着看glaredat怒视glancedat瞥一眼带“eye”的表达:lookedsbintheeye直视某人的眼睛带“sight”的表达看得见:sb/sthbeinmysight/cameintomysight/sb.caughtsightofsth看不见:sb/sthbeoutofsight/fadedaway哭/笑:burstintotears/laughter(大哭/大笑)couldn'thelpcrying/laughing(情不自禁地哭/笑)tearswelledupintheeyes眼泪涌出cheeks/face泪水落下描写“说”温和地说，补充道，坚持说，抽泣着说，耳边轻声说saidgently/added/insisted/sobbed/whispered与arm(手臂)有关的动作描写wavedhisarms.挥手grabbedherleftarm抓住她的左臂puthisarmsaroundher他搂着她描写与hand有关的动作tookout取出/拿出heldone'shand抓住某人的手shookhandswith与...握手handinhand手拉手raisedone'shand举手heldoutone'shand伸出手tookone'shand牵某人的手Herhandsshook/trembled/shivered她的手颤抖着屏住呼吸:Sbheldone'sbreath.深呼吸:Sbtookadeepbreath.心里想:Aninnervoicetoldsbthat内心的声音告诉某人...细节描写:笑看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。(1)Atthesightofthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.(2)Seeingthehelicopter,Janebeamedwithwildjoy.(3)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.(4)Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter,abrightsmilelitupJane'sface/eyes.细节描写:哭(1)Alumpcametohisthroat.他哽咽欲哭。小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com(2)Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的双眼哭得通红。(3)Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.她的眼里满含泪水。(4)Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。细节描写:害怕我感到很害怕。(1)Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.(2)Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.(3)Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.(4)Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(5)Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.(6)Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror,mypalmssweating细节描写:高兴激动当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。(1)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.(2)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(3)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,he...