2023年1月浙江续写Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”P1:Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.P2:Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.【文章基本要素】背景设定：讲述者受邀参加在华盛顿州西部一个老朋友农场举行的烧烤聚会。讲述者在农场外停车，走过一个显然已经多年未使用的挤奶房。事件起因：讲述者注意到窗户处的噪音，于是走进去查看。原来是一只蜂鸟，正拼命地试图逃脱，身上覆盖着蛛网，几乎无法移动翅膀。情节发展：讲述者拯救了这只蜂鸟，发现她是通过破碎的窗户玻璃进入的，然后将她带到室外，安全地关闭了门。高潮：当讲述者打开手掌时，蜂鸟并没有立即飞走，而是坐着用明亮的眼睛看着他。讲述者帮助清理她头部和翅膀上的蛛网。转折点：在回到车边的路上，蜂鸟开始移动。她先是飞离，然后悬停在讲述者面前，彼此深深凝视。情节回落：在烧烤期间，讲述者向朋友们讲述了这次遭遇，他们承诺修理窗户。当讲述者离开时，蜂鸟再次出现，飞到他们中间，并再次直视讲述者。结局：几周后，讲述者再次访问农场。在同样的路上，他感到一种预期感。农场生机勃勃，一切都比以前更加充满活力。朋友们热情地迎接他，他们共度下午，分享故事，享受宁静的环境。窗户已被修理好，蜂鸟还在附近飞翔。当讲述者准备离开时，蜂鸟再次出现，飞向他并在他面前盘旋，仿佛在与他告别。这个故事的核心是人与自然的深厚联系，以及生活中简单时刻的美丽和奇迹。讲述者通过与蜂鸟的这些特殊互动，体验到与自然的深刻连接，这将成为他永远珍藏的回忆。【词块积累】1desperatelytryingto-拼命尝试着2bebarelyableto-勉强能够3ceaseherstruggle-停止了她的挣扎4theinstantIpickedherup-我一把抓起她的瞬间5inmycuppedhand-在我合起的手中6thelikelyanswer-可能的答案7stuffapieceofclothintothehole-把一块布塞进洞里8stickyspider-webs-粘性的蜘蛛网9turnherheadfromsidetoside-把头从一边转到另一边10letoutasqueakingcall-发出尖叫声【续写提纲】Para.1"Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain."1Revisitingthefarm-描述重返农场的情景（农场的景象，气氛，个人情感）。2Reflectionsonthepastencounter-回顾之前与蜂鸟的邂逅（内心的感受，对蜂鸟的思念）。3Observationsandchanges-注意到的变化（农场的新变化，挤奶房窗户的修复，自然环境的描述...